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RE: The Ghost Bakery

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Chilling story. Hehehe. For a moment I was lost when Eva entered the story, I thought she was either with Didi or she was his wife. Maybe it would have been good to explain a bit who she was and maybe make fun of how cowardly Didi was from her point of view, the safety of her house.

I was quite entertained by your story. Very well done.

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