Here wolf! Wait, where wolf? lol
Couple of typos here for you:
"It was indeed a could night, the wind" maybe a "cold" night?
"I saw certainly in her eyes, same one I saw" should be "certainty?"
"atleast feel me" Missed a space lol!
the rest is all good, nice! Keep at it, you're a good writer!
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Beautiful storyline @chincoculbert! Excellent sourcing!
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Thanks for picking out those typos, I'll be sure to proof read before I post from now on.I really appreciate your comment @jamerussell , comments like this really inspire me to do more.
Its a process, I'm getting there thanks to you all support.
Glad you stopped by my friend ❤️✅