This post was obtained through Dreemport.I really liked this story, it is very well written and carried an excellent plot throughout. Couple of really cool twists as well, and it was solid enough to draw the reader into it; I felt like I was there @tengolotodo!
I appreciate that James, I always try to get some detail in my stories and have a plot with some twists and keep the reader engaged enough to want to know the outcome and read to the end.
I appreciate you visiting reading and of course commenting;)
Oh, by the way, I forgot to mention it @tengolotodo, but you write so quick and most likely don't spend much time proofreading your posts before publishing, but you changed Johnny's name spelling a couple of different times (oops, hate it when that happens!) Johnny = mentioned 41 times; Johhny = mentioned 6 times!!! ={) }}}}}}}
ah yes, I didn't proofread at all 🤣
When I write my documents I use Word, but for this blogpost I was straight out onto the front end and boom, at least six typos!
Thanks for that James, I shall endeavour to remember to proofread when I post on Hive!