POETRY: Acrimony (Movie review in poetry)

in The Ink Well5 years ago

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ACRIMONY
Robert, a typical man
Melinda, a typical woman
Came life unfortunate
Sojourning on a dark journey of love
To a blissful matrimony
With one lamp; trust
But not enough oil; patient
Who shall the blame be?
Robert, Melinda
Or Akon? Who before years chorused
"Blame on me"

Robert is Patient
Melinda is Acrimony;
Love with Robert is a dream come true with two
Love with Melinda is the resolution of "ACRIMONY"

When he needed her to;
She was strong
She played week
She was perfective
But she was Acrimony

Shall we blame Robert?
For the sheet beyound the control of his fit
Who made things go wrong
Do a better right
But Acrimony did not let Melinda save the date

Shall we blame Melinda?
Who sacrificed all that was beyond her fight
To save the light
That was never her in her sight
But for Robert who had to make things go wrong for better right.

"I realized i still love you"

DERANGED
Memories of the past
Survived at last
With another different two as the cast

Author's note 📝: ACRIMONY is a movie that tells the story of two love birds with big dreams to live as family. They struggled to survive against all odds until the pressure by family became a burden to heavy to bear by one. Robert who has always hoped to find a better job in order to bear the burden of the house as it supposed begged to have Melinda ignore siblings pressures and unreliable evidences of him having an affair with high school mate before the end of the relationship. In no time after things fell apart, Robert got his dream Job as a single man but decided to hook up with Melinda's siblings alleged lover of his who helped got into his dream world with no attached strings. They both make the dream come live and lived it.

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