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RE: Couple Hundred Meters Away

in The Ink Well4 years ago

I really like your story, @defolumal. The scenario is a powerful one, and it really says something about our times - how people can feel so desperate and unsure. The pandemic is making us all a little crazy! Great job with dialog. It really flows, and it helps to give us readers a sense of the two characters.

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Hi. You're right; although it's giving us all writers some inspiration, I can't wait for the pandemic to be over :) Thank you!