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RE: Joke's on Me ||The Ink Well Prompt #33

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Oh, thank you for sharing that, @faithann. Yes, I can see your intent now. I am trying to think of a way to make it clear, especially since he is the one telling the story. I suppose you could have him say something like, "Janet hasn't always accepted that her brother is gay, but we have worked through it, and now we're very close." Sometimes it's really a puzzle as to how to add a detail like that!

Thank you for being open to feedback!

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Right! Here is a very clear way to include the detail. I appreciate that you gave this illustration.

Thank you for sharing your wealth of knowledge!