Excellent story, @iamsmaller. Great character development, conflict, and resolution.
Welcome to The Ink Well! You will find that we provide feedback, as we are very keen on supporting our community members in their writing journey. Just one small thing: please be sure to provide credit and a link for all image sources.
You have a nice story telling style. We hope you will share more of your stories in our community.
Thanks. I will add credit. The image was from pixabay and it did say that attribution wasn't necessary. I will do so anyway in the future.
Great! Thank you. Pixabay doesn't require it, but it's a best practice, and we have it as one of our community rules. :-)