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RE: theinkwell fiction challenge | A sniper story

in The Ink Well4 years ago

Hi @lacrucita. I really enjoyed your story. It has a very interesting moral dilemma. Also, you added some rich details that make the story feel authentic and believable.

I know you intended to enter the week 9 contest and accidentally missed adding your link to the prompt post. These things happen. Please don't be discouraged. I look forward to seeing more of your writing!

p.s. One small thing to fix in your story is the woman's name. It appears two different ways. :-)

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Thank you, Jayna!
That means a lot, especially now that I'm starting in this platform.
I look forward to staying in touch.
A big hug.
PD: I'll fix it, thank you!

Okay, perfect! Hugs back.