This is a beautiful story, @lacrucita! I love how the story and the past unfold through Carol's dawning awareness of what has transpired with her brother. It's the sign of a talented writer that you drizzled in the details about the parents, grandparents and then just the hint about her life as an artist. Beautifully done.
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Aw this means a lot! I'm really happy to have the opportunity to challenge myself into writing and to see that readers such as yourself appreciate it.
Thank you very much for your support @jayna