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RE: A New Journey Called: Life

in The Ink Well3 years ago (edited)

Lovely story, @mjvdc. Alessia has been transformed in ways she never anticipated by the end of her father's life. It seemed very realistic to me. People can sleepwalk through life, just going through the motions, and sometimes they need a jolt to wake them up and help them to realize they are missing out on life. You really captured that well.

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Thank you very much @jayna! Yes, the loss of her father woke Alessia up, otherwise his words in the note might not have had the same effect.

On the other hand, I really appreciate that you call me by my name, I don't remember why I didn't choose it as a user, but you tagged someone else, my user is @mjvdc. 😊

Ah! Yes, thank you for pointing that out. I've fixed it.