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RE: THE ROAD TO FAITH

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This story is brilliant, @morey-lezama. It was not at all what I expected from the title! But it is so true that finding faith does not happen under the most perfect circumstances. The narrator's jealousy, followed by introspection, awareness, contriteness and grief all tell an amazing story of caring, respect and love. Beautifully done!

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As for the title, I think you are right: it should have been titled "Redemption". It also happens that I feared it would be read as a purely religious story and I transformed some episodes and the final part. Thanks for the review. Regards.