Nice work, @rokhani. You provided plenty of details to help your readers "see" the ships and the action. And you also did a great job of integrating action, dialog and narrative. This is a great read!
Nice work, @rokhani. You provided plenty of details to help your readers "see" the ships and the action. And you also did a great job of integrating action, dialog and narrative. This is a great read!
Thank you for your kind words. It is encourage me to write better.