I enjoyed reading this, @ruen. As I mentioned on Discord, we only accept short stories in this community. Even though this is not a fit for The Ink Well, I always enjoy reading creative work.
We hope you'll come back with a short story that fits our community! You can find some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. You can also learn about creative nonfiction short stories here
thank you @jayna i'll adapt my ttrpg modules into short story format to share in this community ^^