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RE: A day that changed my life - Short fantasy story

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Beautiful story, @stormlight24. I love the rich details that you've sprinkled throughout. It gives us the sights and sounds of a circus, and makes the tale feel very real. I wonder what the narrator will find when he returns to his hometown, and how he will be received! Especially by his friends, who must have thought he was gone forever after the maelstrom that occurred when he disappeared.