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RE: They're Here

in The Ink Well3 years ago

I enjoyed your horror story, and how you built suspense and made it creepy with the white lady, @theimpostor. I would love even more details about the mansion, like cobwebs and long dark corridors, and maybe some paintings on the walls, where the eyes of the portraits are watching him. You could really make it seem like the narrator was lost in the inner part of the mansion for five hours with a few more details!

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Ooh...thank you for reminding me that, I forgot about it. I will do it on my next story or maybe update this one.