I really enjoyed this story, @yuki-nee. It has some very nice build-up in suspense and conflict, and a great message. And you did a very nice job of world building, taking us to a thrilling imaginary place.
I really enjoyed this story, @yuki-nee. It has some very nice build-up in suspense and conflict, and a great message. And you did a very nice job of world building, taking us to a thrilling imaginary place.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.