That's the problem I don't really know a place were they can encourage me like that, hive is the very first place I have ever shared my work.
And I just read other people's stories and try to improve by myself. But I know I really need to improve, I wish see those type of people online, you know, like post some of my work and they help me with the correction. But I'm not giving up, I love to write so I won't stop practicing. Thank you for replying too.