The twist where the young man decides to selflessly use all his wishes to help the others, thereby losing his own chance at riches, is unexpected and contains a moral lesson. Thanks for sharing.
because of his decision to put others first in order to fulfill their dreams and then the young man forgot to be rich and he did not think that what he received was more than his wish.
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Your story contains a large amount of dialogue, which is not a bad thing but it was difficult to follow as it was not clear where the dialogue started and ended and who was saying what. Please take a look at this article for guidance on dialogue presentation, dialogue and action tags.
Could you provide clarification in answer to our questions please :-) (1) is this story completely of your own imagination, and (2) is the AI flag due to a translation issue? Thanks, The Ink Well team.
You are therefore aware that you have posted this story in The Ink Well writing community claiming personal credit for writing it. This is not an acceptable practice. It is called plagiarism as you are stealing the work of others and passing it off as your own content, and for personal gain. Plagiarism is severely frowned upon on Hive and could result in your account being blacklisted. This story will not be curated.
The twist where the young man decides to selflessly use all his wishes to help the others, thereby losing his own chance at riches, is unexpected and contains a moral lesson. Thanks for sharing.
because of his decision to put others first in order to fulfill their dreams and then the young man forgot to be rich and he did not think that what he received was more than his wish.
Thank you for dropping @cedujem
Hello @jedum
Thank you for writing in The Ink Well. It is nice to see you starting to engage with the community and supporting other community writers in the comments :-)
A few things...
Your post is being flagged as Ai during our checks. This could be because you are translating from another language into English using an online translation tool.
Kindly confirm whether or not the story is entirely of your own imagination as AI generated posts are not allowed in The Ink well community.
Was your post perhaps originally written in another language and then translated into English for your Hive publication? If so and if you wish to publish it in The Ink Well, you are required also to publish the original text in your native language so that The Ink Well Admin team can review both versions for AI abuse and plagiarism - a check we perform on every story submitted to The Ink Well. You can find this requirement reiterated in our most recent monthly newsletter published in The Ink Well community. If your post is a translation, it cannot be considered for curation unless this requirement is met. Please do ensure that you follow The Ink Well account to keep up to date with progress and changes in The Ink Well and to be alerted to our weekly writing prompts and highlights magazine.
As regards your images, thank you for adhering to our request for you to use royalty free images :-) One thing we might add is that sometimes less is more, so a one or two well-chosen images may be better than the thirteen that you used in this post. For a couple of reasons: firstly because images tend to break up the flow of a story, and secondly because having to check the image sourcing on this many images is time consuming for curators and may reduce your chances of being curated. If you are wanting Ink well curation, please consider valuing your community curator's time.
Your story contains a large amount of dialogue, which is not a bad thing but it was difficult to follow as it was not clear where the dialogue started and ended and who was saying what. Please take a look at this article for guidance on dialogue presentation, dialogue and action tags.
How to write dialogue in fiction
Thank you for the correction its highly appreciated and next time i will be improving my writing and follow the guidelines correctly
Could you provide clarification in answer to our questions please :-) (1) is this story completely of your own imagination, and (2) is the AI flag due to a translation issue? Thanks, The Ink Well team.
Hello @theinkwell. Thank you
You are therefore aware that you have posted this story in The Ink Well writing community claiming personal credit for writing it. This is not an acceptable practice. It is called plagiarism as you are stealing the work of others and passing it off as your own content, and for personal gain. Plagiarism is severely frowned upon on Hive and could result in your account being blacklisted. This story will not be curated.
Thank you
I don't believe you are really getting the message.
There is no right community for you on Hive to post plagiarized content in.