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RE: Puffless

in The Ink Welllast year

This is beautifully scripted as it brought a smile to me in the twist of the story arc. The protagonist surely made valid reasons to stop smoking but beyond that, saw wealth that could have been amassed, and perhaps, wealth that could be saved from the consequences of smoking also.

Your script is well transitioned from abstract to reality despite its twist.
Thank you for sharing

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Thank you for your carefully considered comment and your time! ❤️💕❤️🤗💕❤️

You're most welcome