Excellent poem, @marlyncabrera. You approach the theme "a bowl of rice" not only written in a very striking way (in a contemporary style), but also with a vision that resignifies the richness of rice, which is metonymy of food, which many people in this world need (and Venezuela is a new and pathetic case). Greetings.
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Thank you very much, @josemalavem. In many ways, rice is like bread, I guess. But you and I know that even that is expensive for many of us in Venezuela right now (even worse in quarantine). It was really easy to connect my feelings to this topic; it took a lot of meditation for me to write this poem, though, for there's so much to be written about this.