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RE: EMMA'S WEDDING

in The Ink Well2 years ago

I really liked how descriptive this story was. From beginning to end, the reader can clearly see each of Emma's actions, becoming completely immersed in the story, even to the point of being horrified (as was my case) when she was about to commit suicide. Fortunately, love was always waiting for her, closer than she thought. Good thing she didn't let the opportunity pass her by. Very good story, friend. Regards.

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Greetings, brother. I think I got a little too romantic in this case by letting love be the savior of this story. It all worked out well for me, although I had my doubts. Thank you very much for your comment. A big hug.