Hello @kaerpediem. How cute a story surrounding food. The fact that the sisters and cousins enjoyed being in this atmosphere is delightful. They are receiving a first-class lesson in all things food related. I love their attitudes and manners.
I also like the fact that the story is told from the teens' point of view. Your introduction of the mirror that gives them the advantage to see at angles what is happening in the dining room from behind the door is an excellent idea.
I love your story. Thanks for sharing.
So happy you liked it @justclickindiva <33