Hello @khoola. I love the setting of the story. For a child, there is no better place from which to begin an adventure. I can truly understand her willingness to leave and meet other people. I love her mode of travel. It's magical from a child's point of view.
Your heroine is a strong-willed young lady who obviously is outgoing and has a bubbly personality. She truly doesn't realize any danger ahead as she plots her course once she's made up her mind.
A lovely story from start to finish. The adventure is outlined at each junction with the actions and reactions exposed well.
Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment... and I am really glad that you like my story.
again Thank you very much!