I confess, I was trying out a style from Florence in Ecstasy by Jesse Chaffe
A big part of the book was told through her erratic thoughts. But after I wrote the first draft, I realised the reader was going to have a tough time understanding. So I started filling in, and maybe not enough.
ah, ok ok, I see the confusion. Thought the raising of the eyebrow to show she had no clue what he was talking about leads him trying to explain why he was apologising...
Another confession, I always mess up my spelling... let me fix it.
Thank you @jayna <33
I always appreciate your feedback :)
You're not the only one with the spelling things. The difference is you do it intentionally but I do it carelessly. I will be more careful in the future.
Thank goodness for autocorrects and Grammarly eh ;D
Same here but in my case, this is not Grammarly but autocorrect.
Happy to help! And thank you for sharing your inspiration. I love that kind of writing. I truly do. It's a challenge to master, but very effective when all those nuances are working. You are a gifted writer. I always look forward to your stories!