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RE: Short Fiction for The Inkwell, Prompt #17

in The Ink Well4 years ago


this play is suspenseful to the end. The ending, leave us ..... thoughtful. Poor baby, he was not to blame for anything.Congratulations @cliffagreen

People debate each other for the decisions they make, but it seemed that after a first happy decision, they remembered the past and all was lost.....

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Yes, you picked up on something I felt when writing this: it could easily be made into a ten minute play. Of course, the baby leaving earth might be hard to stage. :) Thanks for reading.