I was captivated by the story. I was in suspense until the end. Mara is a cautious woman who took martial arts courses.....perhaps she felt more secure in her job and the grandfather .....thought it was a joke that he was blind. I was struck by how accurate he was in defending himself. No one expected that. Well done @juanvegetarian
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Thanks for dropping by and reading my story, @katleya.
!PIZZA