What a captivating story! Jared chose his first Thanksgiving to play some hanky-panky which led to the loss of his family. Carlos saved the day and Alicia's efforts was not in vain!
Mark came out of the bedroom rubbing his tousled hair.
I believe 'Mark' in this sentence should be changed to Jared.
I enjoyed this story, @blueeyes8960. Well done. 😊
You are right @kemmyb! It would be an entirely different story of "MARK" had came out of the bedroom, lol. Thanks for tip and for reading and commenting!