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RE: Couple Hundred Meters Away

in The Ink Well4 years ago

This story is well written. The main character here had an unexpected meeting. I'm thinking, like how does one carry on conversation with a stranger asking weird questions? If I were in this character's shoe, I'd walk away and pretend not to hear the lady. I must say he's a brave one to stop and listen to the lady and also give honest answers.

One thing though, first paragraph says, "...on a warm winter day." Can a winter day be warm? Nicely done! 🍀

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It's all because of the global warming my friend :) thank you.