What an intense and action-packed story! I love this magical-fighting duo of Trina and Amber. Though I do wonder how they got themselves into the cave in the first place.
Trina's ability to create weapons from her tattoos is very cool. The inclusion of a powerful being like Gael makes me want to beg for a continuation of this story. Beautifully written! !LUV 🙂
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I loved writing this story, in the background whenever I participate in these creative writing dynamics I create stories that leave me wanting more, I don't know if it's because I try to empathize with the characters and the stories.
Yes, I think I lacked some closure on the idea of why Trina and Amber were in that place, which frustrates me a bit because a good mention would have been enough, at least so that there was no doubt, but I'll keep it in mind for the next one.
I thank you for your kind words and comment, the support is much appreciated.
It's alright! The action part is gripping. You are doing great already and will do better with each story you write. Keep writing! 🙂