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RE: The Rebels...

in The Ink Well4 years ago

What a twist! The story arc and resolution synced perfectly. Sometimes, when a system appears to have a loophole, it could be a trap.

I like this Christian character. He not only beat the system but also got what he wanted. Alas, they were caught and shot, if I understand the ending properly!

You are an imaginative writer! Well done. 🙂