What a captivating, sci-fi story! I love it. Mr & Mrs Harris are a weird couple though. 😄 New age store? Odd coin and whisperings? I have some questions like why was Mr. Harris reluctant to do the whispering thing?
I think the couple are both from another world and sometimes come into this world to pick unsuspecting people from normal streets like Main street and take them to their world.
The narration is smooth. Nicely written. Well done! 🙂
Maybe you will find out more about Mr. and Mrs. Harris next week, who knows :) ...
I'm not glad you had fun reading it :)