This was an exciting and fun read, I was wondering why Trina was so overconfident until she was able to materialise weapons from her tattoos, and when Amber was able to fight too, using magic, I wondered why she was so cautious when it came to taunting the stone soldiers.
But, then again, each person is different, Trina actually reminds me of a friend when I was younger, I think everyone knows or can relate to the messer who seems to say exactly what's on their mind.
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Thank you! The intention was to add humor and try to make it entertaining.
Trina never shuts up, it's fun for me to think about those people who say everything that crosses their minds even though it might not be a good idea.
There is something special about polar opposites who face the same situation in different ways but in the end help each other, that's Trina and Amber.
100% there is so much entertainment value in your story and a few badass moments!
Yeah, I always find it interesting to let characters chat, and work through a situation they both find themselves in, it can be so much fun to see what each of them says.