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RE: Beyond a dream (story).

in The Ink Well3 years ago

what a wonderful imagination you have, I had a long time without reading a good story, I tell you that I am a wattpat lover, this was full of love and unexpected twists, I thought Tom was dead but as the story unfolded it was Alessia who had died, I was surprised by the truth, Alessia's heart dwells in her beloved's, the things we do for love, no wonder he could see her in his dreams and she was real in them since Alessia is now not only part of his subconscious but part of him. They literally became one.

You have really amazed me, you really have a talent for this, I can tell you put your heart into it. The way you develop each character makes the reader get attached to them, keep it up, you will go far. I admit that the song added the touch I needed, I also usually read with music, but you made me cry with your words. I am amazed at the talent of the users of this community.