She didn't know she was falling for him, not until she found herself in his arms that evening, returning his kisses.
Phew! I really like this sentence. You captured rather nicely what is like falling in love. Sometimes, it just happens. I have not read much love or romance dominant tales, but this one was a great read.
She was so busy loving Uche that she didn't notice when he stopped calling. And now, death. No.
I like the complexity of these few sentences because I can clearly hear the narrator's voice and personality. It makes the moment all the more poignant.
Fantastic story!
Thank you so much. I love that you had fun while reading. I believe my work here was well done.