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RE: A Powerful Magic

in The Ink Well3 years ago

This story has wonderful imagery. I almost wanted the scene to be real. It seemed like a noir mystery film.

He fumbled for a moment and held the packet out. He struck another match. Their smoke tangled, rising, mingling into the mist above their heads.

Excellent visual. Very sensual.

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