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RE: The angry driver (Eng/Eng)

in The Ink Well11 months ago

I really enjoyed this story. I like the setting of Caracas in the 70s, which you did a great job of describing.

In the Caracas of the 1970s, the popular markets were full of people coming and going through the narrow aisles between the stalls, where not a soul could fit. There, my sisters and I used to buy everything from new clothes to Christmas ornaments, because in these places they were cheaper than in the big stores and shopping malls.

This reads like a beautiful vintage postcard. Well done.

I also enjoyed the touch humour you add to this conflict.

I could see my sister's face and knowing her strong character, unafraid to speak her mind, I knew she was going to explode at some point. Her face was red and her lips were tight. And it didn't take long for her to add fuel to the fire.

This made me laugh. She gave the driver a good tongue lashing. Wonderful tale and well written.

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Me dio mucha alegria leer tu comentario y que hayas disfrutado de la historia.
Saludos 🌿Hola @litguru.

Fue muy agradable leerla. Saludos, @popurri!