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RE: '... save the last dance...'

in The Ink Well2 years ago

That's an expertly told tale. There are a few heart-wrenching moments, but through it all, love and affection persevere.

Her eyes were fixed on me as I approached. I could sense her turrets starting to crumble, the once-drawn arrows now tucked away. She rocked slowly back and forth, hugging her knees, the tear-stained letter, clenched in the palm of her hands.

Magnificent imagery. Well done!

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Thank you! I enjoyed the monthly prompt: fortress ... it offered a lot in the way of imagery, and I can't resist playing with words hehe !LUV