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RE: The Invitation.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

As an introvert myself, this story gave me anxiety. Heh. In the end, however, this experience helped you learn and grow in such a cool manner. Learning what cutlery to use is a wonderful skill and one that needs practice. I prefer to just grab stuff with my fingers when I'm alone, but when in Rome...

If I could recommend an improvement, it would be in regards to this sentence: I was young. The question in my mind is how young? It's not necessary to be too specific, but adding a general age could work. For example, mid-teens, late teens, early twenties, mid-twenties, etc.

I enjoyed reading this story because it shows that in spite of the embarrassing episode, your mother was right to push you out of your comfort zone and explore a new aspect of yourself that you would have otherwise avoided. Well done!

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but when in Rome...

act like the Romans

it would be in regards to this sentence: I was young

Specificity, got it. Thank you so very much for the correction. I would do well to pay more attention to the details next time😊

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