This is great. You put a lot of vivid detail into the character's back story, internal conflict, and setting of the story. It's interesting how Lara is oblivious to Stacy saving her life.
This is great. You put a lot of vivid detail into the character's back story, internal conflict, and setting of the story. It's interesting how Lara is oblivious to Stacy saving her life.
Thanks for the comment.