The detail you put into the family's back story and main character's internal conflict is great. Plus, diving into the psychological evaluation of the dynamic between the parents gives the characters depth. Where was Simon all that time?
The detail you put into the family's back story and main character's internal conflict is great. Plus, diving into the psychological evaluation of the dynamic between the parents gives the characters depth. Where was Simon all that time?
Simon was staying at a friend's place all that time. Thank you for the constructive criticism.