Hi Inkwell friends; this week I guess I tried to blend the horror genre with the mundanity of suburbia in my piece, '16 Minutes in Suburbia with a Serial Killer on the Loose'.
If you're looking for some recommendations,
@kingobonnaya crafted a new piece, with a ending mirroring the opening hook.
@fantom22 also created an interesting hook, introducing a speeding car into a densely forested area. I am very much a safety first kind of guy, so this had the effect of making me fear for the driver.