Hello @soyunasantacruz.
I loved the way you described the characters. All women are of an age of maturity. I was surprised by Betty Grainger who is going after a man who is a millionaire, that is to say she is not interested in politics.
As for the dialogue, I think it's almost perfect. It's a couple or a marriage and they talk about an ungrateful woman, hahaha
The detail I see is that the two end lines are not placed correctly.
Cheers!
Thank you @marcybetancourt hehehehe good that you liked the description of the characters and with respect to the end of dialogue if I think that there I did not know how to write well what I meant.
Thank you very much for your comment, sorry for the lateness of my reply I just realized. Thank you.
It's well written but you separated the lines.
We are here learning!