I am not a literary critic.
It seems to me that this is the beginning of a story. By the way, a great start.
Cheers.Hi @khoola. I like what I read and the literary figures of repetition you used.
I am not a literary critic.
It seems to me that this is the beginning of a story. By the way, a great start.
Cheers.Hi @khoola. I like what I read and the literary figures of repetition you used.
Thank you very much.. glad you like it!