This story takes us through one day. The conflict is real, even though it is all internal. Oddie struggles with his sense of self that he believes is in conflict with what the world sees, with what his father taught him. In the end, Oodie resolves his conflict, internally. He will not worry anymore about his failure or success because life is a merry-go-round.
This story works rather well but is marred by minor mistakes such as Mary go round instead of merry-go-round.
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This story takes us through one day. The conflict is real, even though it is all internal. Oddie struggles with his sense of self that he believes is in conflict with what the world sees, with what his father taught him. In the end, Oodie resolves his conflict, internally. He will not worry anymore about his failure or success because life is a merry-go-round.
This story works rather well but is marred by minor mistakes such as Mary go round instead of merry-go-round.
Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community. We appreciate that you engage with other authors.
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