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This story has a very strong arc. There are trials for the protagonist. She falters and almost does not prevail. But then, her better nature comes to her rescue. She finds strength to do what she ought to do. Her temptation is to give in to her father's wishes, to submit. In the end, she resists the temptation.

As your story shows, temptation can come in many forms. Succumbing to tyranny and betraying our hearts is one form.

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