The initial premise of the text is interesting and promising: the grandfather's dream of retirement in Florida impeded by a heart attack. It then delves into the author's personal experience as he helps clean up his grandfather's house after a flood in the neighborhood. As the story progresses, details about the flood in the neighborhood and the need to clean up the house are introduced. The connection between the flood and the author's childhood memories is clearly and convincingly established. The sensory elements mentioned, such as smells, sounds and objects, are presented in a fragmented manner and their emotional impact on the author is explored in a meaningful way.
Overall, the text has an interesting concept, and the execution of the text maneuvers between narrative coherence and clarity. What makes the depth in the exploration of the proposed theme allows for a solid connection between the elements presented and their meaningful impact.
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