Tony stood up,walked round the room in circles,pacing and gnashing his teeth angrily. He kept trying to wrap his head round the possibility of him understanding the situation but the harder he tried,the more confused he became.
"Why does it feel like she is nice to everyone but me,or rather puts everyone's interest first before mine? or maybe am the one being selfish and unable to share". These thoughts kept taunting Tony and the fact that he couldn't do anything about it or discuss it with Jenny who put him in this situation made his head hurt.
Jenny who has been Tony's fiancee for about two years works as a chef across town.She is a tall, beautiful lady with a captivating smile and it was infact in the hotel she works that they both met.
Tony was across town for a job interview so he decided to stop at this beautiful hotel for a snack when he saw Jenny and the rest they say is history.
It's the holiday season and Jenny gave her job more time that she did Tony and even though he felt he understood because he wasn't to supportive the way he thought he should,this thought of having to be home all alone during the holidays and taking cold showers to ease his nerves haunted him.
He was still pacing round the room when he heard a knock on the door, his face suddenly beamed with anger. He wasn't expecting anyone and the thought of someone breaking his circle of thought made him skeptical about answering the door. The knock came again and this time louder than before. With a long face he walked to the door, opened it and a wide smile came rushing out from his face. It was Jenny,she had decided to surprise him so she didn't tell him she was coming, sending a cold chill into her lover's heart...
Hmm,Jenny's the unlikely hero?
Yea u can say that
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