Grey clouds filled the sky, threatening to ruin weeks of meticulous planning for our beach trip. I sat on a wooden bench outside with a heavy heart, yearning for even a glimpse of sunlight. But it eluded me, and much like the overcast skies, my mood turned sober.
The anticipation had been building for this much-needed vacation—a chance to escape the struggles of the past month. Everyone was already seated on the bus, ready to embark on our seaside adventure.
Victor walked up to me, he could tell from my demeanor something was wrong. I pointed to the sky and told him how I felt. He asked me if I had been to the beach before to which I replied with a yes. He asked me what the weather was like when I visited and I told him the sun shone bright.
"You been on the beach when it was sunny, have you ever tried going to the beach when it's raining? It's a whole different feeling, a good one", he said as he grabbed my legs and tried to pull me into the bus.
Reluctantly, I yielded, and we embarked on our journey. To my surprise, the clouds enveloped the sky just enough to create a cool and breezy atmosphere. I secured a seat by the window, relishing the view as we drive towards our destination. Cool air filled the bus, with my friends cracking jokes and adding a touch of lightheartedness to the trip.
As soon as we reached the beach, the sun emerged from its hiding place. I couldn't help but notice the triumphant smile on Victor's face as he made eye contact, a gesture I discreetly evaded, I wasn't going to give him the satisfaction. We dropped off the bus, setting up our belongings under a tent.
Most of my friends dashed toward the shoreline, barely bothering to remove their clothes. Meanwhile, I volunteered to guard our belongings.
The air carried a refreshing chill, unlike the warmth within the bus. I plugged in my headphones and played my beach playlist—a fusion of R&B and soul music. From a distance, I observed my friends frolicking in the water, dancing and reveling in the moment. There was something indescribable about being at the beach—it had a unique ability to sweep away my worries and give me a path on the back.
Someone else came to watch over our bags, allowing me to remove my sandals and leisurely walk toward the shore. Just before diving into the water, I buried my feet in the cold, damp sand, relishing the tingling sensation that coursed through my body. Drawing nearer to the water's edge, I laid flat on my back, waiting for the waves to envelop me. In that moment, a serene silence enveloped my senses, only interrupted by the sound of the saltwater filling my ears. The sun bestowed its warm caress upon my face as it played with the cool breeze.
For that fleeting moment, I was lost to the world. My problems dissipated, leaving only the blissful company of myself.
Later, my friends approached my spot, and we engaged in playfulness amidst the rolling waves, capturing memories through laughter and photographs.
Afterward, I emerged from the water and returned to the shade of the tent. It was the most sublime feeling I had experienced in a long time, and I yearned for the opportunity to repeat it.
I love the way you toyed with those words. It's marveling to know that you had an absolute delight with the water at the end. Such a great trip with great people. ♥️♥️♥️
This is well descriptive. It makes me long for an experience someday.
Good script here
The beach gives off this sense of peace. It's like problems cease to exist when you're at the beach. Only peace and quiet.
Your experience at the beach sounds surreal.
It must have been a day you can never forget.
Plus Victor sounds like a really good friend.
I live near the sea and I know the healing power of the waves. The sound conveys an indescribable peace and the smell of the sea an unmistakable sense of well-being, not to mention the energizing feeling of walking barefoot on the sand. Quite an experience. Thank you for sharing your story with us. Regards
A beach is a place of total tranquility. Everything there comes with soil soothing experience. I like the way you described your experience.
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Reaching the sea with good friends is truly an extraordinary ride, @nelson-george! The sea's waves speak a language that goes straight to our hearts. Thank you for entering your story in the Creative Nonfiction contest and for your commitment to the community.
I've never experienced being in the ocean while it's raining, but I know what you mean about spending a nice day at the beach with your friends. It's a unique and revitalizing experience. Thanks for sharing it.