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RE: THE MOST AMAZING BEACH EXPERIENCE

It's nice that her wish of seeing and spending time at the beach came true. I mean, I totally get Lisa as I am in love with the sea myself. If only I can swim and dive like her.

Those thoughts aside, I love the story overall! Showing Lisa's excitement was on point and the description was detailed and worded very well. Keep it up @eunice9200 !!!