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As he sank into the dark cold lake, he was consumed with longing for all he could never do.
As Grace woke up in the morning, he reached for his pack of cigarettes, pulling out a stick he seats up to search for his match box, finding it, he lights up his smoke and learns back into the headboard and begins to go over the plan in his mind.
He and Jason had gone over this particular plan for over 3 months, it was as easy as taking candy From a baby with an AR 15 or a shotgun, tricky but easy when you knew how(or so he thought).
As he slipped into his Timberlands and cargo shorts, he pulled out his phone to Dial Jason's number.
Grabbing his Keys, he steps into his Golf Gti, pulling off with a screech he soon finds Jason posted on the corner with some of his homeboys.
As Jason steps into the car and he pulls off the went over the plan again, Rollo said the cash was packed towards the end of the room and only one guy with a shotgun guarded the place.
As Grace pulled up to the building, they both put their masks on and pick up their guns.
As the both step out, they dashed towards the building and Jason kicked down the door.
Ordering all hands up, Grace kept watch as Jason headed towards the rear of the building.
Grace heard a shotgun blast go off, panicking he fails to notice a dark hooded figure creep up on him, and knock him out.
As he comes to, he hears a splash as something is dropped in the water, opening his eyes,he finds out that he has been bound with a thick length of chain.
Before could can open his mouth to please, the weight is kicked overboard and and pulls him off deck with it, as he takes he last gulp of fresh air before sinking, he remembered that he wanted to go to art school, before his Dad died and everything went sideways..
He planned to buy a Mustang if everything had gone according to plan, now he was drowning unable to save himself.......
@theinkwell please curate my post
The silence is due to a thoughtful consideration of what to do with your story. While it is well crafted, the story features a violent death. We did mute a story from another author where not only was the death violent but there was blood splashing (!). It's hard for us to sometimes draw lines. In your case the death occurs off scene, but please know that we really don't welcome stories like this, no matter how well written. So, the story can stand. No muting. But we will not offer it an upvote. That's a compromise.Hello @octavius,
It seems you have a great imagination and use words well. Write again. Try to craft a story that is dramatic and action packed as this is one, but not where someone is murdered violently.
Thank you.
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